(TASK 4) Pitch regarding Treatment

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=COb8o8YEe1A

Today, Lyle and I pitched our Treatment plan to the rest of our class.
The class seemed highly receptive of our ideas and really liked the concept of our narrative-based music video. They also said that the track works really well when trying to portray a story.

The feedback we received from our class, including our teacher, is as followed:

- Have a key element that we always go back to e.g.. something about him that she is constantly obsessed with.
- Maybe think of portraying a homosexual relationship
- Increase the performance i.e... more lip-synch

What changes do we plan to make to our treatment?

We do not plan to portray a homosexual relationship as, in terms of our contacts, it would be very difficult to find people who would be willing to play this role. Also the artist Tori Kelly, is clearly portraying a heterosexual relationship because the lyrics clearly outline this. We would prefer not to change this.

We do, however plan to increase the amount of lip-synch used so that there is an element of musical interaction. For example, we could show the main character singing to quite a few of the chorus'. Also, she is constantly going to be seen in the setting of the Forest as it can be used as a motif for isolation. Finally, we came up with an idea. In the middle of the music video, we will increase the cutting rate and show the other side of the story - what reality is. The first half is what she imagines but the second half is reality.